October assessment learner response

 WWW- A very positive start to Media with good detail offered in the highest mark question. This is excellent exam technique!

EBI- Written English could help hold you back from the top grades so this is an area to focus on. See corrections.

Q1: 1/1

Q2: 1/1

Q3: 2/2 

Q4: 1/2- repeated my point

Q5: 1/2-only gave and explained one point

Q6: 2/3- didn't have enough knowledge

Q7: 2/2

Q8: 4/4

Q9: 4/8-need to explain and give more points

3) Did you get any media terminology wrong in the assessment? If yes, make a note of it here for future revision: next to questions

4) Identify one of your stronger questions. Why did you do better on this question?

I believe my strongest question was was question 8. I think this because i was able to achieve full marks and i had all the knowledge needed to answer the question.

5) Identify one of your weaker questions. Why did you score lower on this particular question?

One of my weakest questions was question question 5. This is because i wasn't able to come up with points that i would be able to explain the placement, overall i believe i struggled with it as it was on a film poster.

6) Re-draft your answer to Q9 and type it out in full. Use the mark scheme to identify anticipated content you can add to your response and make sure your typed re-draft is a top-level answer of at least two detailed paragraphs

The producer may use children in their advert  is to grab the attention of the consumer and to make them notice how vulnerable as well as innocent the child is to experience such a difficult situation. The boy in the water Aid advert is locking eyes with the camera this connotes that he is suffering and is in need of help. this makes the audience  pay more attention to the advert and feel upset and may even regret not being able to aid the child. This means it influences the consumer to donate as they feel sympathy for the child. As well as this, the advertising persuades the audience to help the children out as their suffering for no reason.

Also, the Unicef logo is blue which connotes sadness of the children in the advert. The image is very recognisable to the target audience because it associates with lots of poor parts of the world which lacks with serious issues like lack of water or shelter. However, the child standing there emotionless makes the audience feel heartbroken. Therefore, people would want to protect children so this appeals to audience who have children themselves.